Day 1 Assignment: Edit Wikipedia: Difference between revisions

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* Updated the entry on the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/14th_Screen_Actors_Guild_Awards 14th Annual Screen Actors Guild Awards] to show the new categories of Outstanding Performance by a Stunt Ensemble in a Motion Picture and in a Television Series and correct a few typos.  See the [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=14th_Screen_Actors_Guild_Awards&diff=181770594&oldid=179859436 diff] by roguestage. [[User:Eroggenkamp|Eroggenkamp]] 21:38, 2 January 2008 (EST)
* Updated the entry on the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/14th_Screen_Actors_Guild_Awards 14th Annual Screen Actors Guild Awards] to show the new categories of Outstanding Performance by a Stunt Ensemble in a Motion Picture and in a Television Series and correct a few typos.  See the [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=14th_Screen_Actors_Guild_Awards&diff=181770594&oldid=179859436 diff] by roguestage. [[User:Eroggenkamp|Eroggenkamp]] 21:38, 2 January 2008 (EST)


*Added referenced, slightly rearranged, and did minor copyedits at [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Assassination_of_Benazir_Bhutto Assassination of Benazir Bhutto]. See [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Assassination_of_Benazir_Bhutto&diff=181725139&oldid=181721733 diff] by Calliopejen1. [[User:Jendawson|Jendawson]] 22:04, 2 January 2008 (EST)
*Added references, slightly rearranged, and did minor copyedits at [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Assassination_of_Benazir_Bhutto Assassination of Benazir Bhutto]. See [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Assassination_of_Benazir_Bhutto&diff=181725139&oldid=181721733 diff] by Calliopejen1. [[User:Jendawson|Jendawson]] 22:04, 2 January 2008 (EST)

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Edit a Wikipedia Entry

The assignment:

  • Please find and edit an entry on Wikipedia relating to a topic for which you have some level of expertise. The edits should be more than cosmetic and should actually enhance the substance of the article. See Wikipedia: Introduction for more information.
  • If you feel particularly energetic, add comments to your chosen article's talk page. You can edit the talk page and explain the edit you made to the article page.
  • Following your edits, add to this page a link to the article you edited along with a brief explanation of your changes and the username you used on Wikipedia.
  • Edits must be made by midnight on Thursday evening.
  • Before class on Friday, check your edits and see whether anything has happened to them. Report any changes on this page.
  • If you need a place to start, considering looking for stubs (short articles that need to be expanded).

Cyberlaw edits Wikipedia!

  • Updated entry on day labor to add a recent source on targeting of day labor sites for immigration enforcement and clarify content on competing day labor models, and made other minor edits. See diff. --Jahlers 20:27, 2 January 2008 (EST)
  • Updated the entry on Kauai's Secret Beach to describe trail conditions and made other minor edits and reorganization. See the diff by jumpingdeeps. Jumpingdeeps 19:31, 2 January 2008 (EST)
  • Updated the entry on the Mall in Columbia (MD) to add a paragraph about a recent mall managment decision that sparked a minor community protest. I also added a link to a Wash Post article about the controversy in the External Links section. See the diff by Tpseive. Tseiver 20:24, 2 January 2008 (EST)
  • Updated the entry on International Adoption to include more current statistics, recent psychological studies, and recent ratification by the United States of an international treaty on international adoptions and corresponding citations. See diff by Cms9982. --Cseif 20:36, 2 January 2008 (EST)
  • Updated the entry on Tannersville, New York to include more of the town's history and corresponding citations. See the diff by ccj1981. ccj1981 20:43, 2 January 2008 (EST)
  • Updated the entry on Speedlite 430EX to give more details on the pivot functions of the flash and to add images illustrating the difference between on-camera flash and the Speedlite 430EX. See the diff by shamulou. I also added an internal link on the Speedlite page and slightly changed some of the wording to remove the term "confusingly similar" re: Nikon. See the diff khoffman 21:34, 2 January 2008 (EST)
  • Updated the entry on the 14th Annual Screen Actors Guild Awards to show the new categories of Outstanding Performance by a Stunt Ensemble in a Motion Picture and in a Television Series and correct a few typos. See the diff by roguestage. Eroggenkamp 21:38, 2 January 2008 (EST)