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* Name: David Jodoin
===Submission Instructions===
My Wikipedia work was focused on contribution to the wiki page on VoIP http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Voice_over_Internet_Protocol. I selected this wiki as have done a significant amount of work related to next generation voice networks and have designed and developed solutions in this industryMy edits were primarily NPOV edits to the Fax handling section of the wiki and the discussion of T.38 faxing over UDP vs. IP vs. analog.  I selected this section as I found the section needed citations for some of the statements made to prior authors.  I specifically added a couple of references and re-edited some of the language to be less opinionated and more factual from an objective point of view.
Please make sure the name of your file includes your name (example: Name_Assignment1.doc) to avoid overwriting someone else's assignmentGrading for this assignment is on a 5-point scale; late assignments will be docked 1 point for each day they are late (final deadline: Tuesday, February 7, 5:30pm ET).
Specifically I found some of the language to be somewhat whimsical as the author attempted to act as an authority on the topic, yet I found some of the statements made were either anecdotal in nature and not backed by any rigorous research.  In addition, statements were made which belied the authors biases toward the topic and sounded immature.


I experimented to see if something comes up on my watch-list for this topic by in some cases deleting entire sentences of prior writers statements in favor of my ownI also used a online shopping mart as a reference to see if the reference itself would be disallowed due to it being commercial in nature.  I am anxious to see the result of these two edits.
''The '''upload file''' link is to the left, under '''toolbox'''.'' Once you've uploaded your file, please link to it following the format below:
--[[User:Lunatixcoder|Lunatixcoder]] 15:47, 7 February 2010 (UTC)


* Name:
* Link to rule: (URL of the Wikipedia editing policy you chose)
* Link to article: (URL of the Wikipedia article you edited)
* Link to report: (URL of the file you uploaded)


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'''Mike Barker:''' [[Mike's Response To Assignment 1]].
===Submissions===
<b>Name:</b> Sab<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:No_original_research No Original Research]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Harvard_Extension_School Harvard Extension School]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/sites/is2012/images/Sab_Assignment_1.doc Assignement 1]<br>
--[[User:Sab|Sab]] 17:23, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Yerzhan Temirbulatov<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Megaupload  Megaupload]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:YerzhanTemirbulatov_Assignment1.doc Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:Erzhik|Erzhik]] 21:34, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Blake Geno<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:No_original_research No Original Research]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Adderall Adderall_XR]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:LSTU_Assign_-1.odt Report]<br>
 
<b>Name:</b> Fabiancelisj<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:No_original_research No Original Research]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boutique_hotel Boutique Hotel]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Fabian_Assignment1.doc Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:Fabiancelisj|Fabiancelisj]] 21:32, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> BSK342<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marc_Esserman  Marc Esserman]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/?title=Image:Bsk342assignment0.pdf&oldid=7427 Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:BSK342|BSK342]] 21:09, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Harvard 212<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> Public Good [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Public_good  Public Good]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Harvard212_Assignment1.pdf Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:Harvard212|Harvard212]] 12:09 EST, 7 February 2012
 
<b>Name:</b> Alexis Ditkowsky<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/M-Pesa M-Pesa]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Spring2012-BerkmanWikipediaAssignment1-DitkowskyAlexis.pdf Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:Aditkowsky|Aditkowsky]] 17:51, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Jeff Kimble<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:No_original_research Rule]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Open-source_software Article]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Jeff_Kimble_--_Assignment_1.doc Assignment]<br>
[[User:JeffKimble|JeffKimble]] 19:07, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Abby Bergman<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:No_original_research No Original Research]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Digital_divide_in_the_People%27s_Republic_of_China Digital Divide in the PRC]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Bergman_Assignment_1.doc Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:Aberg|Aberg]] 02:43, 6 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Alex Lloyd-Evans<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/United_States_presidential_election,_1956 United States presidential election, 1956]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:AlexLE_Assignment_1.pdf Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:AlexLE|AlexLE]] 15:27, 6 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Emanuele Dominici<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Operation_Gladio Operation Gladio]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Emanuele_Assignment_1.doc Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:Emanuele|Emanuele]] 16:29, 6 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> James Harris<br>
<b>Rule:</b>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Ownership_of_articles Ownership of Articles]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Florida_Republican_primary,_2012 Florida Republican Primary, 2012]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:James_Harris_Assignment_1.doc Assignment 1]<br>
--[[User:Jimmyh|Jimmyh]] 23:00, 6 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Hope Solomon <br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Public_good Article]<br>
<b>Report:</b>[http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Assignment_-1.doc Report]<br>
[[User:Hds5]] 23:13, 6 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Christopher Mejo<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Drupal Drupal]<br>
<b>Report:</b>[http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/sites/is2012/images/LSTU_Assignment-1.doc Report] <br>
[[User:chrism]] 22:12, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b>Gregorian Hawke<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Protection_policy Rule]<br>
<b>Article:</b>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barack_Obama Article]<br>
<b>Report:</b>[http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Ignore_all_Rules_%28Assign_1_-Gregor%29.odt Report] <br>
[[User:chrism]] 22:12, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Quynh Dang<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vietnamese_cuisine Vietnamese Cuisine]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/sites/is2012/images/QuynhDang_Assignment_1.doc Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:Qdang|Qdang]] 05:57, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Jennifer W. Lopez<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Change.org Change.org]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:LSTU_E-120_JenniferWLopez_Assignment_1.pdf Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:JennLopez|JennLopez]] 08:45, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Julia Brav<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:No_original_research No Original Research]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Finger_knitting Finger Knitting]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:JBrav_LSTU_E-120_Assignment_1.pdf Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:Jlynnping|Jlynnping]] 16:21, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> André Pase<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:No_original_research No Original Research]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Soul_Calibur_V Soul Calibur V]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Andre_pase_assigment1.doc Assignment 1]<br>
 
<b>Name:</b> Priscila Lollo<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Daniella_Cicarelli Daniela Cicarelli]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Priscila_Lollo_Assignment_1.doc Assignment 1]<br>
 
<b>Name:</b> David Taber<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Ownership_of_articles Ownership of Articles]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Culture_war Culture War]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:David_Taber_Assignment_1.odt Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:David Taber|David Taber]] 17:04, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Marjolein Siegenthaler <br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Ownership_of_articles Ownership of Articles]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Copyright_law_of_the_Netherlands Copyright Law of the Netherlands]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Assignment_1_Marjolein_Siegenthaler.doc Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:MSS|MSS]] 17:36, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Carl Fleming <br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/OLPC One Laptop Per Child]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Fleming_Assignment_1.doc Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:Cfleming27|Cfleming27]] 17:52, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b>Nicholas Thibodeau<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> Public Good [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_Speech  Free Speech]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:NJThibodeau_Assignment_1.pdf Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:Nthib|Nthib]] 18:28, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Brendan Long<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Albert_Hamilton_Gordon Albert Hamilton Gordon]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/sites/is2012/images/Assignment_1_-_Long%2C_Brendan.doc Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:Brendanlong|Brendanlong]] 19:25, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Samantha Zakuto <br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/OLPC One Laptop Per Child]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Assignment_1_Samantha_Zakuto.doc Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:szakuto]] 19:25, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Manuel Valerio <br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shire_plc Article]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:MValerio_assignment1.pdf Report]<br>
[[User:Mvalerio|Mvalerio]] 20:12, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> TBaechel<br>
<b>Rule:</b> Citing Sources [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Citing_sources]<br>
<b>Article:</b> St. John's College [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/St._John%27s_College_(United_States) Article]<br>
<b>Report:</b> Assignment 1: Wikipedia [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Baechel_Assignment_1_E120.pdf Report]<br>
[[User:TBaechel]] 20:23, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Just Johnny<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Ownership_of_articles Ownership of Articles]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prince_harry Prince Harry]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Johnny_Assignment1.doc Assignment 1: Wikipedia]<br>
[[User:Just Johnny]] 20:20, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Michael Suen<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Ownership_of_articles Ownership of Articles]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Censorship_in_Hong_Kong Censorship in Hong Kong]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/sites/is2012/images/MichaelSuen_Assignment1.doc Assignment 1]<br>
[[User:Michaels|Michaels]] 00:43, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
 
<b>Name:</b> Mike Brant<br>
<b>Rule:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Neutral Point of View]<br>
<b>Article:</b> [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/OLPC One Laptop per Child]<br>
<b>Report:</b> [http://cyber.law.harvard.edu/is2012/Image:Mike_Brant_Assignment_One.doc Mike Brant_ Assignment One]<br>
[[User:Mike|Mike]] 21:29, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 13:33, 1 March 2012

Submission Instructions

Please make sure the name of your file includes your name (example: Name_Assignment1.doc) to avoid overwriting someone else's assignment. Grading for this assignment is on a 5-point scale; late assignments will be docked 1 point for each day they are late (final deadline: Tuesday, February 7, 5:30pm ET).

The upload file link is to the left, under toolbox. Once you've uploaded your file, please link to it following the format below:

  • Name:
  • Link to rule: (URL of the Wikipedia editing policy you chose)
  • Link to article: (URL of the Wikipedia article you edited)
  • Link to report: (URL of the file you uploaded)

If you have trouble finding the file you uploaded, check the list of uploaded files.

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Submissions

Name: Sab
Rule: No Original Research
Article: Harvard Extension School
Report: Assignement 1
--Sab 17:23, 1 March 2012 (UTC)

Name: Yerzhan Temirbulatov
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: Megaupload
Report: Assignment 1
Erzhik 21:34, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Blake Geno
Rule: No Original Research
Article: Adderall_XR
Report: Report

Name: Fabiancelisj
Rule: No Original Research
Article: Boutique Hotel
Report: Assignment 1
Fabiancelisj 21:32, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: BSK342
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: Marc Esserman
Report: Assignment 1
BSK342 21:09, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Harvard 212
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: Public Good Public Good
Report: Assignment 1
Harvard212 12:09 EST, 7 February 2012

Name: Alexis Ditkowsky
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: M-Pesa
Report: Assignment 1
Aditkowsky 17:51, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Jeff Kimble
Rule: Rule
Article: Article
Report: Assignment
JeffKimble 19:07, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Abby Bergman
Rule: No Original Research
Article: Digital Divide in the PRC
Report: Assignment 1
Aberg 02:43, 6 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Alex Lloyd-Evans
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: United States presidential election, 1956
Report: Assignment 1
AlexLE 15:27, 6 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Emanuele Dominici
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: Operation Gladio
Report: Assignment 1
Emanuele 16:29, 6 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: James Harris
Rule:Ownership of Articles
Article: Florida Republican Primary, 2012
Report: Assignment 1
--Jimmyh 23:00, 6 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Hope Solomon
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: Article
Report:Report
User:Hds5 23:13, 6 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Christopher Mejo
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article:Drupal
Report:Report
User:chrism 22:12, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name:Gregorian Hawke
Rule: Rule
Article:Article
Report:Report
User:chrism 22:12, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Quynh Dang
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: Vietnamese Cuisine
Report: Assignment 1
Qdang 05:57, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Jennifer W. Lopez
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: Change.org
Report: Assignment 1
JennLopez 08:45, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Julia Brav
Rule: No Original Research
Article: Finger Knitting
Report: Assignment 1
Jlynnping 16:21, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: André Pase
Rule: No Original Research
Article: Soul Calibur V
Report: Assignment 1

Name: Priscila Lollo
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: Daniela Cicarelli
Report: Assignment 1

Name: David Taber
Rule: Ownership of Articles
Article: Culture War
Report: Assignment 1
David Taber 17:04, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Marjolein Siegenthaler
Rule: Ownership of Articles
Article: Copyright Law of the Netherlands
Report: Assignment 1
MSS 17:36, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Carl Fleming
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: One Laptop Per Child
Report: Assignment 1
Cfleming27 17:52, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name:Nicholas Thibodeau
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: Public Good Free Speech
Report: Assignment 1
Nthib 18:28, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Brendan Long
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: Albert Hamilton Gordon
Report: Assignment 1
Brendanlong 19:25, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Samantha Zakuto
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: One Laptop Per Child
Report: Assignment 1
User:szakuto 19:25, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Manuel Valerio
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: Article
Report: Report
Mvalerio 20:12, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: TBaechel
Rule: Citing Sources [1]
Article: St. John's College Article
Report: Assignment 1: Wikipedia Report
User:TBaechel 20:23, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Just Johnny
Rule: Ownership of Articles
Article: Prince Harry
Report: Assignment 1: Wikipedia
User:Just Johnny 20:20, 7 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Michael Suen
Rule: Ownership of Articles
Article: Censorship in Hong Kong
Report: Assignment 1
Michaels 00:43, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

Name: Mike Brant
Rule: Neutral Point of View
Article: One Laptop per Child
Report: Mike Brant_ Assignment One
Mike 21:29, 7 February 2012 (UTC)